Production-Feed back on rough cut

We showed our rough cut to our peers to get some feed back, and their opionion on what they think the strengths are so far and some suggestions for improvements. The Rough cut Was no where near on how we wanted the final outcome to look because at this stage we had only layed out the structure and order on how we want the video to appear. As a group we know there needs to be improvements on our music video but a second opinion from our peers can benefit us.

Comments from peers

Angel- "I thought the Costume was nice, i felt that you put thought into it and planned it well"

Naomi-" The camera movements are good, i really liked the spinning and the panning that you did with the camera"

Jimmy- "The concept of the lyrics goes with the video, everything matched"

Billy- "The Locations were really strong and well planned"

Janie- "The graffiti shots were different in the locations which is good because you kept the 'urban' look"

Sasha

Overall we were really happy with the feedback because we was about worried that our viewers wouldnt understand it. Anoother thing was that they noticed the different locations that we used because we planned and thought about it carefully.